Peer Review

When i presented my magazine to the class, I received some very reliable feedback. From the feedback I received, someone told me that it would be a good idea for the rest of my article to have a background color similar to my cover page, which involves unique greens, oranges and some beige. although someone said mint green was good for my article, most said it would be a good idea to change it. Also, i heavily agreed with a peer with the idea that the picture distribution on my feature article should be changed. i also heard that i should add captions to all the photographs in the magazine so it can bring more context.  i heard i should also put a black outline around the feature article title on the cover page and get rid of the page number below it. i should also add or move the title in a concrete area where there is more space. also, i realized, as mentioned by someone, that my entire article was only based on Sarasota-- and my magazine had to be more global. This brings to my attention that I am not close to the finished product of my magazine.